| 2006-08-12 01:17:56 |
Math Teacher
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hmm... no mention of him hitting his head when he got hit by the car, but it clearly doesnt have to be, and isnt supposd to be believable, so overall, pretty damn good story. 8/10 |
| 2006-08-12 02:40:37 |
Math Teacher
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nice,i hope theres a second 1 continue from dis i came at the middle of the story |
| 2006-08-12 10:58:44 |
Math Teacher
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more!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2006-08-14 22:41:20 |
Math Teacher
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teenage boy with that kind of power shit if it moved i would fuck it!! love the concept. |
| 2006-08-16 06:56:32 |
Math Teacher
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Just writing it are you? I have essentially the same story (from another site) from back in March of 2003. |