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2006-08-14 00:43:20 The Pregnant Teacher ur a dik i said it was first story ur an ass man. fuk .
2006-08-14 01:06:51 The Pregnant Teacher you repeat the same line more times then i care to count
2006-08-14 09:05:39 The Pregnant Teacher You seem like a faggot, pregnant people arn't hot but your making them all the uglier your story sucks, If you want to write something literate, Get a gun and put it on the top of your head and splatter blood all over your paper and there you go its best thing you'll ever write i swear, your not 18 I bet more like 12 and your spell fuck like "fuk" and dick like "dik" so just go blow your head of this was the gayest story maybe anyone read in the entire history of XNXX. So you really need to go to school or just die because your horrid at this and life by the looks of it. Obsessed with sex but can't spell or anything Lmao Titty Luver >>Cock Luver Lmao

You repeat the same line more times then i care to count
Don't ever write again, i couldn't ge
2006-08-14 22:42:19 The Pregnant Teacher listen, you made an attempt, it's more then those ass hole can say.

I've followed this site a while. this is not a site to get feedback to improve your writing. Your audience here just want something to masterbate too. Many can't even spell correctly in their responds.

Keep practicing. Find a better site. Don't listen to these pricks. They're just mad you couldn't get their rocks off.
2006-08-15 00:32:19 The Pregnant Teacher lmao thx man ur right these guys r all just lookin for a beat cuz they dont get any in real life. It WAS my first attempt after all. My other story got good reveiws and ratings not half bad. Ive also got another 1 in the works so keep ur eyes open
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