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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-15 19:26:43 | My sexy teacher_(1) | SEQUAL DO ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT tha... one HOT story right there |
| 2006-08-15 20:03:42 | My sexy teacher_(1) | I would love a sequel if you learned how to spell. Your diction is a little coarse; dick juice and boobs aren't very becoming words. I am impressed that you know the difference between a nipple and an areola, and I thought it was cool that he was as open to anal play as she was. There were some places where the description was good and the action was exciting, but there were a lot of abrupt shifts and strange descriptions. When his nearly naked teacher showed up, was his first interest really a porno magazine? You have a lot of promise, but you need to have someone proof read your writing. You're probably 80% of the way to a good story. Thanks, and please try another. =dreamer= BT... the average penis is 5 inches, not 7. A 7-incher is bigger than 97% of other guys' penises. |
| 2006-08-15 20:08:41 | My sexy teacher_(1) | it seems ok, but it doesnt seem realistic enough. he walked in to her class andshe said wanna feel my tit, sorry but doesnt do it 4 me. JiMmY |
| 2006-08-16 02:19:10 | My sexy teacher_(1) | Not realistic at all. He walks into class. She tells him to feel boob. They go to his house and fuck all day conveniently nobody home. Oh and his ass was totally clean and she loves fucking it. Stupid as hell |
| 2006-08-16 11:40:31 | My sexy teacher_(1) | It almost seems as if you don't proofread your own stories. If you don't read them back over and fix the obvious errors, I would suggest that you do or that you find someone else to do it (who is competent). Parts of the story seem unrealistic. I would encourage you to keep trying. |