| 2006-08-24 06:01:06 |
Losing My Virginity to My Two Sexy Cousins
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while i won't be as harsh as the others, this was not really a good story. don't do a sequel per se, but i'd definitely encourage you to write another arc. just, please, not a continuation of this same story, it wouldn't be a good idea |
| 2006-08-29 21:33:28 |
Losing My Virginity to My Two Sexy Cousins
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Wasn't excellent, but was ok considering it was your first poat. Needs to be longer.. 6/10 |
| 2006-09-02 00:35:05 |
Losing My Virginity to My Two Sexy Cousins
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This is pretty good. Though I agree that you should've used mircosoft word to fix up bad grammer and misspellings. I give you a 4 for effort and another 4 for the idea. Go for a sequel! |
| 2006-09-20 17:25:10 |
Losing My Virginity to My Two Sexy Cousins
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that was so fucking gay! |
| 2006-09-27 03:22:07 |
Losing My Virginity to My Two Sexy Cousins
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i won't be harsh nor will i be nice. there was basically no detail in the story it just went from one thing to another so fast. on the other hand it was nice and a relaxing change from the other stories. ill give you a 5 out a 10. |