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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-15 04:46:00 | Landlord's Daughter | There was no flow, reread it and try again. 4/10 |
| 2006-08-15 12:31:12 | Landlord's Daughter | did you have 2 girls in your room?lucky bastard or did she have a split personality?great story otherwise |
| 2006-08-15 20:42:33 | Landlord's Daughter | Your description of the story isn't accurate. Male / Female Teens means one male and more than one female teen. Young means pre-teen, not nineteen. The actual sex part was only ok, but your lead up to it was very good and had the feeling of a true story. I could sense the tension and the awkwardness. If you could put some of the same hesitancy into the sex scene, this would be great. Thanks for the work. =Dreamer= |
| 2006-08-16 00:06:53 | Landlord's Daughter | There is no 2 girls in the room. I messed up becaues I was replacing name Suzy with Stacy, cause Suzy sounded stupid. I overlookd a couple Suzy in there. Sorry |
| 2006-08-16 00:22:39 | Landlord's Daughter | not bad i had same thing happen though |