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Date Story title Comment
2006-08-16 17:46:59 The Greatest Party of My Life 8/10 . . . this should have a higher rating than it's current 6.8. apparently the desperate troll writers have gotten to this! (personal irritation, sorry).

parents leave, kid has a party. believable.

--ashley barbie
2006-08-17 00:20:03 The Greatest Party of My Life So-so
2006-08-17 16:31:29 The Greatest Party of My Life Not bad for a first timer. Had an orgy setting. Hard to figure that only three of you did anything. Tex
2006-08-18 13:30:31 The Greatest Party of My Life Pretty decent story, but there's not a remote chance of it being true. You aren't going to score a hat trick (three holes in one game) your first time around. You aren't going to be able to make her come a few times during her first sex without coming yourself. Hell, you probably won't even last sixty seconds if it's your first time. I didn't even get my dick all the way in my first time, and I don't have any kind of endurance problem.

If you say that your two hot bisexual friends want to lose their virginities on a pool table, fine. That makes an awesome plot for a story. Don't expect us to believe that it is true.

Other than that, your writing is pretty good, and could be excellent with practice. Thank you for writing.
=dreamer=
2006-08-25 19:27:04 The Greatest Party of My Life ighgfhfghg
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