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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-16 17:46:59 | The Greatest Party of My Life | 8/10 . . . this should have a higher rating than it's current 6.8. apparently the desperate troll writers have gotten to this! (personal irritation, sorry). parents leave, kid has a party. believable. --ashley barbie |
| 2006-08-17 00:20:03 | The Greatest Party of My Life | So-so |
| 2006-08-17 16:31:29 | The Greatest Party of My Life | Not bad for a first timer. Had an orgy setting. Hard to figure that only three of you did anything. Tex |
| 2006-08-18 13:30:31 | The Greatest Party of My Life | Pretty decent story, but there's not a remote chance of it being true. You aren't going to score a hat trick (three holes in one game) your first time around. You aren't going to be able to make her come a few times during her first sex without coming yourself. Hell, you probably won't even last sixty seconds if it's your first time. I didn't even get my dick all the way in my first time, and I don't have any kind of endurance problem. If you say that your two hot bisexual friends want to lose their virginities on a pool table, fine. That makes an awesome plot for a story. Don't expect us to believe that it is true. Other than that, your writing is pretty good, and could be excellent with practice. Thank you for writing. =dreamer= |
| 2006-08-25 19:27:04 | The Greatest Party of My Life | ighgfhfghg |