| 2007-08-18 21:19:15 |
Deleted Scenes Of X-Men 3: Scene 1
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dont listen to the critisising comments i thought it was an excellent story and please write another one soon 10/10 |
| 2007-08-20 01:37:09 |
Deleted Scenes Of X-Men 3: Scene 1
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dude |
| 2007-08-20 12:28:46 |
Deleted Scenes Of X-Men 3: Scene 1
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k first off good story but to be honest you spell like your 8 years old, keep the stories coming but next time use spellcheck or get a dictionary maybe. |
| 2007-10-16 17:17:11 |
Deleted Scenes Of X-Men 3: Scene 1
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good 9/10 cause of the spelling though. :/ |
| 2006-08-18 19:59:23 |
Last Night at Camp
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get yr past tense and yr present straight and check yr spelling, take more time with the details when they are copulating(fucking). Yu have a great idea here but it sitnks because of the above!! |