| 2006-09-09 00:12:23 |
Last Night at Camp
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poop |
| 2006-09-21 20:20:21 |
Last Night at Camp
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listen to what the others "sayed" and use a spell-checker |
| 2006-11-08 21:41:16 |
Last Night at Camp
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good story .just come back to your senses,there is no such thing as gallon of cum you arebv in adream.lets be normal it sounds way out so just fuck off fool |
| 2007-06-18 14:24:30 |
Last Night at Camp
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don't jack off while your writing, it fucks with your mind. the story line was ok but the spelling and grammar kind of take away from it (dont give people that load about "if you want good grammar go to a real site!" just because this is a free erotica site doesnt meen everything on it has to be shit) overall laking good details, i'd give it a 5/10 |
| 2007-10-15 18:00:29 |
Last Night at Camp
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this story is a peice of shit |