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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-31 02:22:38 | Interstate Innocence | Very good, nice to see the punctuation and grammar is first rate. 10/10. |
| 2006-08-31 03:11:29 | Interstate Innocence | thank my editor. on second thought, i'll thank her for you. she deserves it. -blade- |
| 2006-09-01 16:23:59 | Interstate Innocence | Hot sweet story kid, but your spelling needs work. u gotta ten for the activity, which for two kids that age was perfect. |
| 2006-09-02 20:23:05 | Interstate Innocence | great, original idea -- two kids taking a bus ride together. the more experienced little girl leading the boy down the garden path. 10/10 |
| 2006-09-07 10:18:30 | Interstate Innocence | well the story is very good...and i enjoy the hot experience. But don't you think cumming inside the bus will not smell! i mean come on...with all this squirting is there any people in the bus that hasn't smell it? 8/10 |