| 2006-12-27 11:40:40 |
Interstate Innocence
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Chap, better story than some of the others I've read cause you explained every little detail. It was one of the best on this site dude. Now while your free write part 2. 10/10. |
| 2007-02-09 16:32:38 |
Interstate Innocence
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amazing, spectaculr, intreging, these are some words to describe this sotry, keep up the great work, am looking forawrd to part 2 |
| 2007-02-21 20:48:22 |
Interstate Innocence
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Great story... and one that reminds me of something that happened to me on a bus more than thirty five years ago! Keep writing! |
| 2007-02-22 21:29:07 |
Interstate Innocence
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I Definetly enjoyed the story. Very convincing. And besides all of the sex, I liked the fact that becky kept saying Dan's name all the time. It's cute |
| 2007-02-25 11:30:07 |
Interstate Innocence
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wow best story i had ever read |