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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-29 02:15:07 | My Sex Journal | I appreciate the sheer effort involved in writing this, but it did get repetitive and boring about half way through. The sequence of events for each sexual encounter really followed a formula; it almost got tedious. You did a great job describing the positions, and I could really visualize what they were doing. The story could use more interaction than "let's get fucking". I'll agree with the third poster; too many orgasms. you described eleven orgasms in eighteen minutes in just one session. Here's a challenge to another reader: count *all* of the orgasms in this story. We may have an xnxx record. The story was basically good, but you need to provide better variety. =dreamer= |
| 2006-08-31 01:36:05 | My Sex Journal | Why don't you cut your hands off, freak? |
| 2006-08-31 22:51:06 | My Sex Journal | go to hell asshole, your story sucked you suck and you're parents dont even like you. you're adopted |
| 2006-09-13 12:14:32 | My Sex Journal | Too long. It got a bit boring quarter of the way through |
| 2006-09-13 20:01:12 | My Sex Journal | not so great. it was very long and repetitive. try making it shorter and being a little more creative. broaden your vocabulary. i read the words "subsided" "orgasmed" "cum" and such over and over to the point that it was almost annoying. you need some serious revision and be more descriptive. "oh i humped rob and then came three minutes later," isn't very intriging. |