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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-04-01 17:19:09 | My Sex Journal | eh, decent. 8/10 |
| 2006-08-23 04:06:36 | Shacking Up | great story.more pleeez! |
| 2006-08-22 22:28:26 | The Art Class | fucking hot story |
| 2006-08-24 14:39:58 | The Art Class | 6/10 -- the writing was a bit rough; it didn't flow. there were plenty of descriptions but it was sometimes confusing. a lot of unneeded information. no paragraph separations made it a little difficult to read. suggestions for next story: double space between paragraphs, take out all unneeded information, and imagine that the bitchiest person you know is critiquing your story. |
| 2006-08-24 18:33:59 | fucking my student | if you are a teacher, i feel sorry for your students, you writing is terrible. You should give yourself a failing grade. |