| 2006-08-28 18:57:57 |
fucking my student
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No offense, but you realize that when someone says something your supposed to put quotes around it and indent for that, right? I didn't even finish it, the spelling was pissing me off because I had to keep going back to try to figure out what the hell you were trying to say. |
| 2006-08-29 00:44:26 |
fucking my student
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You did not get to check it over? What is the rush? Did you just HAVE to get it submitted half-assed like this. No matter the spelling and punctuation...the story itself was ridiculous. Do not submit again. I only wish I could give a 0 out of 10. |
| 2006-08-29 15:02:57 |
fucking my student
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good plot.... thats the only good thing about it 1/10. |
| 2006-09-06 00:24:31 |
fucking my student
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capitlize my "i"s (my last post corrections) |
| 2006-10-20 10:59:27 |
fucking my student
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yes you r a kid |