| 2006-08-24 01:45:36 |
The Artifact-part 5
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I agree with the reader that said complete bullshit, and everything else, bravo reader, on a lighter note i will say the stories have huge potential. also you might want to describe your penis that you hold in such high regard to make it seem more descriptive and attentive however i will continue to read , all in all 6 out of 10 |
| 2006-09-28 23:40:49 |
The Artifact-part 5
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not bad 8 out of 10 |
| 2006-08-24 02:23:59 |
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Give me more |
| 2006-08-24 03:53:32 |
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What in god's name is a penus? |
| 2006-08-24 08:24:23 |
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not too bad, but too many characters for a short story. it was hard to keep them straight. it read like a true story, a little complicated. and from the 70s or 80s, with the names. 7/10 |