| 2006-09-26 21:13:38 |
A Soldier story
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Loved the story - however: 4 Roses doesn't make a vodka - and - probably the biggest error is: Marlboro cigarettes didn't exist in 1946. The major brands were: camels, pall mall, phillip morris, lucky strikes, chesterfield, and parliament (the first filter cigarette). |
| 2006-10-14 22:33:10 |
A Soldier story
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Dumbass army boy ahooker is a hooker N.Y. Hamburg, Toyoko Siagon |
| 2007-06-20 20:53:05 |
A Soldier story
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I have to agree with MANIACMARBLE the beginning of this story is a very close match to W.E.B. Griffin's book. |
| 2007-10-21 15:29:46 |
A Soldier story
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I'd say the main thing was having fingers in her clit. A looot of guys make this mistake when writing erotica. |
| 2006-08-25 12:09:24 |
Abducted family
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good story but why does the aussie have an irish accent?! |