| 2007-01-08 12:01:44 |
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more attention to breasts and nipples, Action between Jane and Tina, like the idea of Jane friend tie up of Tom |
| 2007-01-08 19:26:30 |
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story is real good id love to read about tina getting fucked in her ass by an older man |
| 2007-01-08 23:15:15 |
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i think you should have tina bring a bunch of friends her age over--- guys and girls ----- |
| 2007-01-09 06:27:09 |
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A great story. I believe what makes it good is you wrote what your fantasies was, not someone elses fantasy. I would love rto ead more from you on this story line and see where YOU take it. |
| 2007-01-09 12:39:14 |
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you've done o.k. so far.i agree young is good.just keep writing-thanx-8/10 |