| 2006-09-05 00:38:54 |
A longing lust of mine for Tom 2
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good story but don;'t keep us in supense more surpries and twist please. more more more more and more |
| 2006-09-05 10:49:13 |
A longing lust of mine for Tom 2
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That was the BEST Please write more fast i have to know wha happens. that is the first story in a lonf time that has made me so fucking horning i need to go fuck my girl NOW!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2006-09-05 21:33:47 |
A longing lust of mine for Tom 2
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more now now now 10/10 |
| 2006-09-06 05:30:56 |
A longing lust of mine for Tom 2
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Seems you and these commenters all need to do refresher work in spelling. It's "bored", etc. Lots of misspells all through your story and these comments. Education really does make senSe. Not a bad theme, though. Grammatically fair. A 5. |
| 2006-09-06 15:27:49 |
A longing lust of mine for Tom 2
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Your concept is interesting, but you really need to use a spell-check: "bored" "brought" "tongue" |