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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-06 22:04:18 | A longing lust of mine for Tom 2 | You definitly need spelling lessons and so do most of the responders . 8 |
| 2006-09-11 01:13:04 | A longing lust of mine for Tom 2 | Don't bother to right more; I am so board that mt tounge is dry. Oh...and buy a fucking dictionary, retard! that fucking sucked! |
| 2006-09-15 22:49:10 | A longing lust of mine for Tom 2 | please make a sequel i loved this story so much and it wasnt too unrealistic either. |
| 2006-09-03 17:22:10 | Tag, your it | Not ordinary, and screw the person who gave you a 1 straight off. The pace was a bit jerky, and the story as a whole needs more feeling, but your descriptions are good and in some cases marvelous. A solid 7. |
| 2006-09-04 00:09:35 | Tag, your it | Thanks! I apprechiate the critism and the compliments both. I am still pretty new to this so am still getting the timing and everything down. But practice makes perfect right? *winks* |