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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-04 02:05:03 | A Teen-Ager's Computer | When the fuck did everybody become every body? And when did teenager become teen-ager...dumb shit. When I saw those mistakes in the first two fucking sentences I figured you are too shitty of a write to read on. |
| 2006-09-04 02:24:34 | A Teen-Ager's Computer | you are a dumb shit nobody wants to stay a virgin AND have porn on their computer numbnuts. u should take writing classes you puss dripping cow cunt |
| 2006-09-04 04:49:21 | A Teen-Ager's Computer | ""NO, NO, NO. PLEASE DON'T, I'LL DO ANYTHING. JUST DON'TTELL HER SHE'LL GROUND ME FOR EVER. PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE. YOU'LL RUIN MY ENTIRE LIFE IF SHE FINDS OUT. I SWEAR I'LL DO ANYTHING."" A few grammatical mistakes are acceptable but blatant spelling errors where the writer didn't put their document through a spell checker is just trash. And please don't make the characters so pussy. He is basically telling her what will affect him most, so that she can take advantage of it. How stupid. |
| 2006-09-04 13:02:44 | A Teen-Ager's Computer | lol umm nice, but yh......Lol |
| 2006-09-05 04:22:52 | A Teen-Ager's Computer | tell me how they tied him up,then took off his clothes?cut 'em off?spelling 'nuff said |