| 2006-09-05 18:11:07 |
A Teen-Ager's Computer
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OK, I got as far as them shouting at each other and got bored, didn't think it read well, sorry. |
| 2006-09-05 19:31:05 |
A Teen-Ager's Computer
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i think that it was good but honestly do u think a teenage boy will still want to be a virgin?? I MEAN HELLO!! but i thought it was fucking good |
| 2006-09-05 19:50:17 |
A Teen-Ager's Computer
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ok for 1... no teenage guy would ever complain about losing his virginity.. and 2.. that was too short of an ending for how it was... |
| 2006-09-05 22:33:00 |
A Teen-Ager's Computer
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Have to give the characters some credit for some smarts. All he had to do after she left was delete the file, deny everything and say she was setting him up. |
| 2006-10-08 16:09:02 |
A Teen-Ager's Computer
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I read the intro and decided ok this story is fucked over. i mean look at this the guy didnt spell think wrong once but twice! Introduction : ----->ThnikThnik |