| 2006-12-27 21:35:17 |
What a horny aunt!!!
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All these negative comments, especially about realism in fiction, put me off putting my own stories here. The plot goes the way the author wants. As for realism...this tale is marked fiction. It's meant to be a bit of sexual escapism, not a Booker prize winner. If it were real the Aunt would've told her nephew to get the hell out of her room instead of fucking him! It's a bit crass to tell an author how to write their stories, and it's stupid looking for realism in a story of fantasy. As for the story itself, I've had to bookmark for later reading. it as I came when it got to where our hero came in his Aunt's pussy! Well punctuated and easy to read...and what beautifully described aunt! 10/10 |