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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-13 16:23:58 | Time goes by... | ya was he even cold yet, horny slut, ya write on, a horny slut like that must do other things |
| 2006-09-14 02:50:47 | Time goes by... | Mildly erotic, not enough foreplay. It was flash, bang thank you Mam, and the poor guy did not even cum. The second time there was absolutely no foreplay. He just stuck it in and she moved enough to make him cum. Lack of action cooled the story off quite a bit |
| 2006-09-14 04:05:58 | Time goes by... | Buggery?? Anal sex,birdbrain,!!!!! Story was quite nicely done. You can't afford to hang around if hubby might be cured. |
| 2006-09-15 19:45:22 | Time goes by... | Wow, great story man. You made it an actually pleasant read. Your grammar and such are great, the only thing is a bit longer of a sex scene, maybe some foreplay or more description of sex (like adding in another position). 9/10, will be a 10/10 if you add more sex to it (although most other stories could use more story, in this case just a bit more of the actual sex, and maybe a bit more of a story outside of the sex (like throughout a normal day) would make this perfect). |
| 2007-04-28 09:49:33 | Time goes by... | Stylish, totally believable, well written. |