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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-17 17:25:00 | A Tale Of Two Jessicas | work on your grammar and spelling. write the story in a word processing program. Then, copy and paste it into here. if you want high ratings and comments, nix the celebrity angle. it isn't well received on this site. |
| 2006-09-21 09:03:06 | A Tale Of Two Jessicas | u need to write more i dont care if the gramer is bad |
| 2006-10-04 19:54:54 | A Tale Of Two Jessicas | BAD! If you want to portray such a "classy" image, you need to write better, Grammer was appaling {I know pot, kettle, black} it didn't flow well, and was hard to read. your idea may have been ok, but it was seriously marred by terrible writing! |
| 2007-10-16 13:16:41 | A Tale Of Two Jessicas | I'm sorry but I had trouble getting past the first paragraph. Please proof read your next story, put in all of the words, and try reading it out loud first. Try writting another one. |
| 2007-11-13 02:30:04 | A Tale Of Two Jessicas | wheres the sex didnt see much here , this is a sex sight right |