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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-17 15:11:02 | Bouncin' Becky | very good story very good |
| 2006-09-17 23:06:31 | Bouncin' Becky | That was really good, keep writing. Maybe check over it once or twice before you post and you'll get rid of the eras, even so, 9/10 Keep it up :) |
| 2006-09-18 00:12:26 | Bouncin' Becky | well done, didnt get me off, it was good to reaqd something good, similar thing happened with me, guys at aschool didnt give a shit bout my needs, thed cum and leave keep it up |
| 2006-09-18 13:11:56 | Bouncin' Becky | Good story but you're getting too much sx too soon. Have to build up to the climaxes--Just like in real life. You got more sex on one page than what most women would get on three pages. Read some of the other good stories to get some idea as to what your readers would expect. But, keep writing. Gave it an 8/10 |
| 2006-09-18 13:45:27 | Bouncin' Becky | dude shut up. he can write what he wants. yeah great story. part 2 plz |