| 2006-09-16 20:01:16 |
My sweet secret made servant
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sort your english out man 2/10 |
| 2006-09-17 05:42:00 |
My sweet secret made servant
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U r a bangladeshi bustred |
| 2006-09-18 18:57:06 |
My sweet secret made servant
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learn fucking englis, i stopped after the 3rd line cause i couldnt understand jack shit |
| 2006-09-25 20:33:10 |
My sweet secret made servant
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Ahhh... Nice story. I really liked it! Go on writing, you are really good at it! Gave it a 10/10 |
| 2006-09-30 17:18:43 |
My sweet secret made servant
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very poor english , try to improve , not a bad story |