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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-19 11:18:15 | young sister | your describing your sister, and im getting hard then suddenly you go on about your dick and how long it is please. if you must say how long your dick is wait until your inserting it into one of her passages plz kthx |
| 2006-09-19 20:45:04 | young sister | fuck this is pathetic |
| 2006-09-19 20:50:35 | young sister | yeah alright story. needs some work. to the reader who says he's a cop. shut the fuck up you dumbass bastard. we all know that you jack off to these stories 10 times a day. and to the reader who said quote "these wankers can't write" i speak for myself and say no i can't write my way out of a wet paper sack. but i am still entitled to an opinion |
| 2006-09-19 22:30:51 | young sister | pathetic moron bad storie 1/10 |
| 2006-09-20 02:33:33 | young sister | not too bad dude bout a 5/10 work on your wording and use paragraphs, also work on your plots. it didnt make any sense but there was good action. try a couple more and read the posts |