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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-19 11:08:44 | Sins of the father A | more descriptop on what keri looks like.. |
| 2006-09-19 11:18:31 | Sins of the father A | You need to retitle this piece "Sins of a Writer." Use paragraphs and the past tense, for fuck's sake. |
| 2006-09-19 18:50:55 | Sins of the father A | Retirment very unlikely. The story is still going on. As too her description, either read the first two parts or ignore it from here on. |
| 2006-09-19 22:59:48 | Sins of the father A | Ok. You do not like this segment. Too bad. My incredible Thai girlfriend that gets this straight from does like it. Mmmmm. You would not believe how delicious she is. |
| 2006-09-20 17:09:57 | Sins of the father A | Well done. Loved the present tense but could use a persepctive relative to age and interests. |