| 2006-09-22 11:19:04 |
Sins of the father A
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very difficult to follow. use better sentence structure and try again. |
| 2006-10-05 23:15:15 |
Sins of the father A
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Oh great! Anohther anonymous critic. What do you write and how good is it? |
| 2007-05-15 15:21:41 |
Sins of the father A
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very sweet- well done, without any violence. men with very young loving daughters don't need to use force. what a priviledge it is, and a fathers right, just between them.little girls want to please their daddy.rock on - continue the story. |
| 2007-03-05 18:17:32 |
A unusual situation pt-2 Debbie
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ure stories r soo hot!!! guaranteed nuuuttt every time i read one of ures. if this story was read 8352 times, i wonder why there were no comments. do you delete them or something? |
| 2006-09-20 17:44:07 |
Forbidden Fruit iii Corrected
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oh wow ! this is almost how i was started into my life as a slave slut ...this is awesome! |