| 2006-12-18 18:46:04 |
The Mysterious Lana (Ch 7)
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like how you actually take the time to develop a story, not just guy meets girl, fucky fucky, the end |
| 2006-09-30 19:41:51 |
Six-Mile High Club chapter 5
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wow gets better and better |
| 2006-09-30 23:27:47 |
Six-Mile High Club chapter 5
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wtf... |
| 2006-10-07 00:35:23 |
Six-Mile High Club chapter 5
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Is he going to see her again? |
| 2006-10-11 00:37:34 |
Six-Mile High Club chapter 5
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I like this ending, very good. I'm starting to wonder if he'll see his previous lover again or not, and if he'll ever even see his parents...haha. Oh, and I'm liking the return to the first person view, although the 3rd person was a nice way to make it so that the sequal didn't get old, I'll give you that. |