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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-29 16:21:47 | Sister Quickie | great-it was a quickie.definetely more.pleeez?10/10 |
| 2006-09-29 16:50:28 | Sister Quickie | too short but really hot! |
| 2006-09-29 20:26:16 | Sister Quickie | The story was reasonably good. It might seem longer if you broke up the paragraphs and set the dialog apart. You do know how to do that, don’t you? EXAMPLE: Her breathing became shallow as she touched herself. She must have thought I was asleep, but I wasn’t. In fact, it was I who had been mistaken. I could have sworn she was out already. I removed my hand from my cock and listened silently as she gasped in climax. “I know you’re awake, you pervert,” she commented. “I heard you move your hand.” I said nothing as my respiration froze. “Don’t fake it; you were getting yourself off, weren’t you?” I gulped as silently as possible. Below, I heard the rustle of sheets and the pressure against the wood as she climbed up the old ladder to the top bunk. READS BETTER, DOESN’T I |
| 2006-09-29 22:29:22 | Sister Quickie | disguisting |
| 2006-09-30 08:02:48 | Sister Quickie | sweat |