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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-11-09 12:56:06 | Crusade of Terror 1 | don't bother to write more. This stinks! |
2006-11-10 11:43:22 | Crusade of Terror 1 | cool |
2006-11-10 15:07:38 | Crusade of Terror 1 | for the genre your going for its a good story keep it up |
2006-11-11 01:51:51 | Crusade of Terror 1 | The story in itself is good, but not sure how many people will like the fact that you used (/11 as the cause of the killers anger. While I am sure that someone from 9/11 probably feels the way this killer did, using 9/11 in an erotic story might draw harsh criticsm. Be forewarned. Great writing, good style, hope to see more. |
2006-11-12 08:09:31 | Crusade of Terror 1 | This was good. Y ou have set up for a potentially great series for both the cop and the killer. Waiting for more so keep up the good work. |