| 2006-10-03 11:29:50 |
Amy's first time. Chapter 1
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good story-keep writin'-9/10 |
| 2006-10-03 14:49:52 |
Amy's first time. Chapter 1
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hurry up and finish chapter 2 i wanna read how he fucks that little bitich in her tight ass |
| 2006-10-03 16:21:56 |
Amy's first time. Chapter 1
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Please ignore the first comment, there is always at least one jerk who can't understand a good story when he/she reads one. |
| 2006-10-03 18:16:03 |
Amy's first time. Chapter 1
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A good story, but i do have one small complaint.. It was a little hard to follow sometimes because of lack of punctuation such as quotes so we know who is talking and when. Other than that very nice. |
| 2006-10-03 18:38:36 |
Amy's first time. Chapter 1
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good story, but incredibly hard to follow due to severe grammar issues. |