| 2006-10-10 21:10:22 |
Bris new lifestyle
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hey asswipe baller try one your damn self and see how many words are mis-spelled...of course you can't even spell "much" so why bother ....still rates a very very weak 1 because i can't rate it a 0 |
| 2006-10-11 06:31:12 |
Bris new lifestyle
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I love it when readers begin to argue and fight among themselves ---- and all over a very weak, poorly-written story. Let's face it, this story sucks gonads. |
| 2007-01-05 01:56:42 |
Bris new lifestyle
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um...wow. that was pretty awful. the story had absolutely no flow to it. the sex scenes were not even good. i'm a little pissed. i was horney until i read this story. do better next time. |
| 2006-10-08 16:30:18 |
Tortured Tits
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brilliant more please |
| 2006-10-08 20:15:19 |
Tortured Tits
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I agree...devilish but pure genius |