| 2006-10-22 20:50:55 |
Amy's first time chapter 5
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What a turn-off when an author says "I didn't check for proper grammar" and "live with the mistakes." Only a total moron would write such crap. A good writer will do everything in his power to write proper english. Shame on you, you fucking dickhead. |
| 2007-05-17 01:05:22 |
Amy's first time chapter 5
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First off people don't always speak perfect english. As the old saying goes: Ain't, Ain't no word. If in your world everyone speaks perfect old world english you must live in a dome somewhere. What I have said is if you don't like the story don't read it. Nobody is holding a gun to your head to make you read them. yes live with the story as is. I am working to improve on the spelling and such but the grammer used may be just the way someone talks. Like in the south HEY means hello but other parts of the country would have no idea what you are saying when you yell Hey! got that Bubba! Are you still thinking a kar (pronounced Ker) is the same as a car. depends where you are from. But that is above your head, Right? OOPS! Should have asked. Is that statement correct? |
| 2007-03-16 05:07:25 |
First Time Driving
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Great story! I love it! Would love to read more like this one. |
| 2007-03-16 05:18:07 |
First Time Driving
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too short |
| 2007-03-16 09:06:43 |
First Time Driving
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Excellent!! Try to make it last longer |