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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-02 00:47:17 | Casey and Ally [lesbian] | i eat cunt. |
| 2007-01-03 23:25:09 | Casey and Ally [lesbian] | needed more of an introduction. paragraphs would help make it easier to read. |
| 2007-01-23 15:37:42 | Casey and Ally [lesbian] | ??? Definitly needs work |
| 2007-03-25 01:10:50 | Casey and Ally [lesbian] | Great story. I reiterate the need for paragraphs. Practice makes perfect. |
| 2007-06-03 03:15:27 | Casey and Ally [lesbian] | hmm. i love goths. and i love pot. but u dont describe either of these very well. it all seemed a little rushed but i liked the writing. paragraphs would be great. and theres no need for the faggot part. the tv remote was a funny idea however and made me laugh and reminded me of when i used a phone. i like your style. |