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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-12-08 14:32:17 | Edward: Motherly Love | im had my first baby with my brother...he was there when i had an at home unassisted birth...he fucked me to make me orgasm as i was in active labor. |
| 2006-12-10 02:33:33 | Edward: Motherly Love | Was pretty good, I gotta admit I didn't read it all though. I didn't have too many problems with the writing, but the grammar could have been better. Also, you really overused the "boy" words. "Boyish prick" "boyish cum" etcetera, etcetera. I understand you are trying to enfore the fact that he's just a kid and all, but if nothing else at least stray from putting boy in the word every time you are trying to say he's young. 7/10 |
| 2006-12-10 08:58:46 | Edward: Motherly Love | all right |
| 2006-12-14 13:35:41 | Edward: Motherly Love | hi |
| 2006-12-14 23:44:57 | Edward: Motherly Love | k |