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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-30 20:30:43 | Hiking in the Mountains | didn't get the point of the urinating.. to fuck somebody is one thing, to urinate in one's mouth.. humm, doesn't fit very much into your scenario where the main heroes are shy at first to engage in just a sex.. the rest was fine. a bit too long but fine. |
| 2006-10-31 01:10:02 | Hiking in the Mountains | Cloud 9 not 7 |
| 2006-10-31 01:26:44 | Hiking in the Mountains | Great fantasy |
| 2006-10-31 20:26:47 | Hiking in the Mountains | Story started out great but the writting was poor. Latter the writting caught up with the story. This was a great story. The writing at first was poor. It improved as the story progeted. I wish you had reedited the early part of the story. I gave the story ten because of the story line and how the written improved at the end. I wish you had edited the begining. The story is great but many reeaders might have given up early. I'm an old rock hound. I helend in the fifties in notheastern Ny. Write more but edit better, I would love to tell youu about the thelve year old cheery I took when I was fourtteen at a climbing camp at West Point. Write more but edit before submitting. |
| 2006-11-01 21:40:08 | Hiking in the Mountains | Thats sum sick ass shit you need ya head checked 4 real and any1 who likes this shit r a bunch of nasty pervs ur all goin to hell 4 this crap |