| 2006-10-25 17:33:12 |
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People who think they're story writers; authors, if you will, should be ashamed of themselves if they can't spell even simple English words. The english language and proper use of same is the primary tool of a writer, no matter how good or bad his/her imagination and thought process skills are. But I don't believe you'll ever pay heed, Cerealkiller454. That's a shame. |
| 2006-10-25 20:22:34 |
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So the last person who commented did so anonymously: presumably so that they could not be identified as the pretentious asshole that they so clearly are. Too much grammar in a story like this, and it loses flow. I would bet that the commenter stops and starts during sex to consult dictionaries and sexclopaedia. 10/10 from me, and looking out for the next part. |
| 2006-10-26 13:15:03 |
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decent, though the grammar errors and small mix up in quotes make it somewhat worse than it could be. |
| 2007-05-11 11:39:24 |
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make more |
| 2008-01-23 21:28:12 |
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Realy stupid piss poor |