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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-12-21 15:04:41 | Twas The Night Before Xmas | You saw santa doing what to mommy!? Very nice. |
| 2006-12-21 22:03:18 | Twas The Night Before Xmas | Rhyme and metre way to strained. Not enough sex and not enough story. |
| 2006-12-22 09:34:44 | Twas The Night Before Xmas | toys !! , where are te damn toys !!! bad santa , bad bad santa !! cheery xmas tale :) |
| 2006-12-22 23:46:29 | Twas The Night Before Xmas | *whistle in cyber space... |
| 2006-12-23 05:36:58 | Twas The Night Before Xmas | It was OK, but saying "their" when it should have been spelled "there," and "seman" instead of "semen" kind of ruined it for me. When will you "writers" ever learn that proper grammar and spelling are paramount to a story. Only stupid dumb-asses would accept poor grammar, but not people who've been to school and learned a few things. |