| 2004-05-28 16:22:59 |
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Awsome story... Best i've read so far on the site. I've also got to agree with Angel, the story is great, with or without the sex. Keep up the work! :] |
| 2004-06-03 10:12:37 |
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best story on the site. i love this! it makes it feel like an actual short story instead of just a sex story. keep up the good work! |
| 2004-06-07 00:09:35 |
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Amazing..... By far the best story I have had the pleasure to read on this site. keep up the good work. the Characters seemed like real people and the story didnt feel like a cheap porno. If you plan on making writing a career this is a great start. |
| 2004-06-11 22:12:46 |
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this is the best story, sex and romance! that's the way it should be! just what a girl wants to read. |
| 2004-06-11 23:59:51 |
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that story was one of the best stories i have ever read and definitely the best on the site i felt like i knew the characters really well and i felt like i was actually there that was an absolutely excellent story and u should get it published |