| 2004-06-12 19:01:35 |
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it was good like sum good cheese cake yum cheese cake is so gud |
| 2004-06-13 23:17:56 |
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I really really loved this story... now I wanna have passionate sex on a golf course with one of my best guy friends!!.... keep em coming dude |
| 2004-06-13 23:27:41 |
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Great great great stpry. I loved it.... I agre witj RedAce... even without the sex it would be great. I adored this story. Keep writting... |
| 2004-06-13 23:49:55 |
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FINALLY!! Someone took the time. . . . .oh jesus, character development, tasteful detailing. . . . . .Christ, you're like the Tolkien of Erotica. Granted, I'm only 16, but I can see your talent. I wish I could register and write stories to show you up. Good Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... |
| 2004-06-15 00:15:49 |
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I agree with Zeppilin, everything is good, very deserving of top rated. |