| 2006-10-23 10:30:57 |
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Old Guy, You just keep outdoing yourself. I recall a previous comment that stated that the reader would read 100 installments if you wrote that many. I, Personally, hope you write many more than that. This series has the potential to be a true epic sex drama. Thanks so much. I wait with bated breath for the next chapter. George in Cincy |
| 2006-10-23 10:38:52 |
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That was over much too quick. I loved the background on Sonya, John and Darlene. It kind of shows why each took the road that they did. The love scene was fabulous and I felt there should have been a torture section to go along with it. Now I have to try the salad he described, it made my mouth water. The ending was classic og. “They weren’t sure of the time, but lay there holding each other tight as the once raging fire was now down to warm cinders and smoldering coals. I wish I could give you a 20/20, but a 10/10 will have to do. More please. |
| 2006-10-23 11:11:17 |
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Thanks guys! Love the comments. Working on ch. 8. Just finished ch. 1 of Wild Willie. It is a little different for me. If you guys don’t like it please let me know and I’ll dump it. I have ch. 2 about half way done, so I’ll send it in, but I’ll wait for your comments. |
| 2006-10-23 11:51:19 |
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Note: There are still a few readers who send their e-mail comments containing questions, however sign their Feedback, Anonymous. It is not possible to respond unless there is an e-mail address attached. If you are concerned that your address will be shared, have no fear as I treat all communications with readers, secret and confidential. I welcome any comments and questions, as I believe they will help me with my writing. Without you, I am just a hack, banging away on my keyboard like a monkey trying to write all the great books. Thank you again for taking the time to read my work. og. |
| 2006-10-23 15:27:50 |
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This series is a keeper! It's the hottest one I've read. Gets a ten this time too. Tex |