| 2007-05-07 23:02:39 |
The Canoe Trip
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it was ok but dude fuck her plz... |
| 2007-05-10 14:12:29 |
The Canoe Trip
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great story, 9/10 great imagination but get the dude to fuck her next time |
| 2007-05-28 03:29:29 |
The Canoe Trip
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You're a good writer. Something a lot of people on this site can't do, and can't appreciate it. The story itself could be tweaked, so you have a 9/10. But the writing itself is far better than most. |
| 2007-11-26 07:22:30 |
The Canoe Trip
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these are chick masturbation stories...he cant fuck her. |
| 2007-12-03 17:34:02 |
The Canoe Trip
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A great exhibitionist story - ignore the dumb asses who wanted your characters to fuck. They missed the point. |