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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-22 15:19:15 | MY SISTER SHERI | pure shit |
| 2006-11-22 16:17:00 | MY SISTER SHERI | WTF is your caps lock bitton fucked? that was fucking retarded go kill yourself you shit fuck. with love x |
| 2006-11-22 19:03:36 | MY SISTER SHERI | Learn how to type. That's how we communicate here |
| 2006-11-22 23:03:31 | MY SISTER SHERI | content=b format=f--------... the fuck is the font ......... |
| 2006-11-23 01:13:15 | MY SISTER SHERI | The story isn't bad, but the writing needs a lot of work. Author may want to consider typing future efforts into a word processor program to help alleviate spelling and grammar mistakes before posting. I also suggest ditching caps lock in favor of proper sentence case, and the use of paragraph structure. It makes things easier to read, which is a good thing, unless you are just writing for yourself. |