| 2006-12-15 00:05:57 |
The Love of O
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Excellent wrighting but mind it that it is no writing without charecter buildup & fiurthermore you have not aroused anybodys desire. You can not & should not bore anybody while you are writing SEX stories. |
| 2007-01-01 20:17:11 |
The Love of O
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The previous commenter doesn't get it - that's all! Take it from a lady - very erotic and doesn't need character build up - It's the joy of the moment! |
| 2007-02-18 21:44:45 |
The Love of O
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You achieved your sought after Erotica. Sweet. |
| 2007-08-10 08:46:23 |
The Love of O
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Erotica doesn't have to be a story with an introduction, climax (no pun intended) and resolution. This is a sweet little story of an interlude between 2 lovers--and very hot. My pussy is brimming over as I imagine how this scene would play out between my lover and myself. Nice story. |
| 2006-11-24 10:37:00 |
Our new black janitor
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What the fuck was he arrested for??? I hope there is a second chapter!!! |