| 2007-04-23 15:05:22 |
Me,mom, and the two cousins (revised)
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Wait a minute - this is the revised version? That means its supposed to have been improved, right? Wrong. Give it up now, please. You are never, repeat never, going to write a quarter decent story, never mind a half decent one. |
| 2007-06-06 00:12:05 |
Me,mom, and the two cousins (revised)
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I loved it please write more stories like this one |
| 2007-06-14 11:46:47 |
Me,mom, and the two cousins (revised)
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loser,,,awful story!!!! |
| 2007-10-31 21:49:04 |
Me,mom, and the two cousins (revised)
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100 dollars says that the idiot commented his own story just to make himself feel good that at least one person liked it.... |
| 2008-03-17 10:53:13 |
Me,mom, and the two cousins (revised)
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if this is your second try i will try to read your 7th try really poor grammer is poor spelling is poor {spell check} and it's choppy try it till u get it right |