| 2004-03-27 16:20:05 |
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You sir, are a consumate artist and author. I aplaud you and many, many kudos! |
| 2004-03-30 06:04:48 |
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Yeah this is a great story... altho i cant quite get the whole weeping thing lol.. it IS a story! Only slightly put off by the fact they r only 13/14. (maybe cos its my lil bros age- totally dont see him like that and dont even like to think bout my baby bro thinkin like those kids!!) |
| 2004-04-01 20:48:15 |
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i ney cryed when my father was hung for stealing a pig but i'll cry now. not bad at all though kudos sir. i mean i wouldn't give u the nobel prize and it's not better than lord of the rings but it's damn good attempt. |
| 2004-04-01 21:57:41 |
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well i liked this story it was well writen |
| 2004-04-03 12:06:23 |
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honestly, i thought it was to sad to make a good erotic story...and it was a waste of time for me to read it to get what i wanted outa it...but it was some excellent reading. kudos. you really must have worked hard on that peice. it was excellent |