| 2004-04-04 21:43:26 |
TRISHA AND JENNIFER part 2
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A great story, filled with intense emotion, and teen frustrations that are very realistic. One suggestion, though. USE SOME NEW VOCAB! The word "cuntal" just doesn't turn me on. ;] Other than that, this was a well written piece. |
| 2004-04-05 15:51:22 |
TRISHA AND JENNIFER part 2
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very good story |
| 2004-04-06 00:50:28 |
TRISHA AND JENNIFER part 2
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A very good story and i got hard and jerked off while reading it |
| 2004-04-11 16:18:48 |
TRISHA AND JENNIFER part 2
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whats with the incest man i mean you could of just wrote it as a best friend or something but it was her brother. besides that good story |
| 2004-04-13 23:30:28 |
TRISHA AND JENNIFER part 2
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though doughnuts and candy are some of the best things ever created i believe this story will go onto a big and majestic list of the best of the best |