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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-11 22:17:32 | Michelle-Pool Party 5-Ch 15 | Marvelous mental pictures while I stroked my hot cock .I could just see those wonderful little pussies standing out and saying kiss me, and kiss back behind it, that lovely litle round,tight target with all the rays coming out of it. Radiating passion to every part of either male or female bodies...sort of a litle hidden second clit just dying for attention . I, and I'm sure many other readers, are trusting you to have dozens more chapters in the wings to drain us wonderfully. |
| 2007-08-24 14:36:22 | Michelle-Pool Party 5-Ch 15 | Ok...it was great up until now. Actually, the pool party thing turned me off, and this chapter killed it completely. If Lisa isn't a slut, then no one is. Seems I'm the only one who doesn't like it, though. |
| 2006-11-27 13:30:51 | The cottage by the sea | very good 10/10 |
| 2006-11-27 15:06:32 | The cottage by the sea | A Very Good Story. Give it 10/10 |
| 2006-11-28 05:26:04 | The cottage by the sea | Excellent tale of sex and love. The only problem I could see was that the author, Salinas, bounced around from past to present tense and back to past. Here's a writing tip from a writer: If you choose the past tense, stick with it all the way. It makes for a better read. All the same, I'm giving you a 10/10. |