| 2006-11-28 00:32:01 |
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i can't read ebonics.. fuck jehova witnesses... |
| 2006-11-28 03:47:17 |
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Well I liked it, and think you whould write more. Sure there are errors, but there easy for my to over look. If it was my own story it would have driven me nuts, but I think its great. And fuck you people and your shit about ebonics..you think you know what your talking about..you have no idea, shut the fuck up and try to say something positive instead of being butt hurt over it. |
| 2006-11-28 07:40:44 |
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You need a proofreader before submitting your story; you also need grammar and spelling instructions; and, best of all, take a creative writing course at the local community college. The fact that you're black has nothing to do with anything. There've been plenty of fine black writers, so don't pay any attention to racial comments. Keep on trying to write. You'll do fine one of these days. |
| 2006-11-28 10:12:16 |
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very good, I would ahve liked to been there to give you one more good fuck. |
| 2006-11-28 11:46:51 |
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I 'm sorry if my remark sounded racial. I did not intend to hurt anyone and yes there are alot of good writer who are black. I hope you will write more story using the comment from the reader who suggest you take a creative writng class |